Friday, September 9, 2011

Her Voice Comments

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i believe there is a God
i can hear her voice
in the tears of the homeless
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Eric Cockrell
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Smoky Hoss 10 September 2011

I really like this one, God is in the pain of life, not just the joy; in all the messiness, not just the beauty; and the way you've expressed it here is powerful. I also appreciate the use of her for God, for God is all, all the' hers', and all the 'hims', in all the times of us all.

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Unwritten Soul 09 September 2011

Oh so much pain and heartfelt drained here, it has a bitter to see such bad things around life...well let's us pray for better days who in needs..everyone..good poem with value of emotion :) _Unwritten Soul

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