Her Velvety Hands Comments
Our lips parted for a moment
Her velvety hands guided me
To her bosom taut
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A vivid depiction of desire. Very passionate. Beautifully written with compelling imagery.
Excellent title- -I was browsing through your collection of poems for one to read and Voila! This beautiful poem said Read Me! ! ! Read Me! ! ! ! And I did and wow this was a very sensual read! ! ! 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++=+++++++=+++++=
A beautiful poem on love, longing and desire has been astutely and incisively delineated. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.10
Thank you Kumarmsni Sir. Your kind words of appreciation make my day. Obliged
So beautifully expressed. Desire is a powerful emotion. You have put it so artistically. A sensual write, avoiding vulgarity so skillfully and naturally. Kudos!
Hi Nosheen, Your insightful words of appreciation are treasured by me. It is so very kind of you to favour me with the good words. I believe that subdued expression, hidden behind the words is what poetry is all about. As Tagore has said, in poetry, the meanings of words have to be suppressed using meter and verse, so that emotions express themselves freely. But I have not done this deliberately. It is just that this poem was born in this shape.
A refined poetic imagination, Unnikrishan. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.
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8/7/2025 11:13:33 PM # 1.0.0
Sweet and fragrant. A little grapefruit spoke Of her love and longing To my shivering palms....sweet expression! A lovely poem...Top score!
Thank you Dilipji for your kindness in appreciating my poems