Saturday, May 14, 2022

Her Velvet Cloak Comments

Rating: 5.0

The velvet cloak is cascading, all adorned with sequin stars,
Final streaks of sky colors fading, as pearl moon gazes afar.
The queen's lately departed, from the plush burgundy room,
Blue Neptune on her left, and and scarlet Mars on her right,
...
Read full text

Evelyn Judy Buehler
COMMENTS
M. Asim Nehal 15 May 2022

Last line sums up everything, Nicely written poem. I quote 'When sunlit cream tulips went on for miles, capturing smiles.' Full ******

0 0 Reply

Beautiful poem that adds hues to vision

1 0 Reply

Thank you for your kind words, which brings smiles.

0 0
Close
Error Success