Tuesday, October 6, 2015

Her Thirst ♥ Comments

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When the first drop of rainwater falls on her,
Hear the music hear the shout,
See the joy and the smell like the liberated souls,
Actinomycete bacteria crawling in air,
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M. Asim Nehal
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T Rajan Evol 31 October 2015

Superb poem,........

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 October 2015

See the joy of life! ! And, feel the ways of nature. Nice work.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 October 2015

Beautiful thirst minimizes on first falling of first rain drop. So interesting poem shared really. Nice and wonderful...10

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Rajnish Manga 06 October 2015

Wow.... You have beautifully captured the magic of the first drop of rain accompanied by 'the joy and the smell like the liberated souls'. Great poem.

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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