Monday, April 22, 2013

Her Tears Fall No More Comments

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A single tear hits the floor as she looks at the knife that use to spread her feelings around. Her body trembles as she thinks about all the lies that he told to her, saying that he loved her then kissing another infrount of her. Obviously she wasn't worth his time and obviously he didn't care what happends to her.
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Kelly Seale 16 May 2013

Shadow, the darkness that you seek, the release of pain from the hurt you feel... yes, transparent here in this piece. I know, I hope, your writing does it for you... makes it bearable and you find release with words. Deep, Dark, and Intense. Great write.; -) Kelly.

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