Tuesday, May 4, 2010

Her Tears Comments

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Rain is the earths tears
Pouring down the sky
She mourns for all she is
What she was, what she will become
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Serenity Prayer 07 May 2010

great job! ! i love how you turned something negative into something positive. great job! ! !

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Achim Wollscheid 04 May 2010

Great personification! I love your poem.

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Layla Stone

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