Her Succubus Comments

I'm not certain of what's what in this poem (see other comments) . I give 4 stars. bri : )

'She bewitches hearts in the dead of night.' James, are the 'hearts' those of males, females, OR both females & males?

'stanza 6 almost made me feel sorry tor succubus. BUT, I wonder about the title Her Succubus. Perhaps you 'want' a comma after Her? ?

stanza 6 almost made me feel sorry tor succubus. BUT, I wonder about the title Her Succubus. Perhaps you 'want' a comma after Her? ?

'succubus sŭk′yə-bəs noun A female demon supposed to descend upon and have sexual intercourse with a man while he sleeps. It needn't be femals nor deal with .