Wednesday, April 25, 2012

Her Struggle Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sky was pitch black
Stars twinkled and shone.
She watched in wonder,
The moon was the throne.
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Serena Taylor
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Captain Cur 10 May 2012

Well written and delivered.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 03 May 2012

Great motivational poem sister...well done! !

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Liliana Roman 26 April 2012

i like how you set it up like a story. i love the last stanza! ITS AWESOME! ! ! ! ! wow sorry i accidentally hit caps lock. good write. keep writing.

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