Friday, September 25, 2009

***her Spirited Smile Comments

Rating: 3.5

(dedicated to Meggie Gultiano)

deep from within
arises from a flaming core
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Ben Gieske
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Ken E Hall 15 October 2009

A shining tribute thru a shining poem I'm sure her spirited smile will grow bigger with your poetic kindness uavanice1 regards

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Robert Howard 08 October 2009

A worth lyrical tribute to a lady of exceptional grace, imagination and kindness of heart.

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Catrina Heart 04 October 2009

This is such a beautiful poem of dedication to a beautiful and ever loving poetess Meggie. Great metaphorical lines for her florescent beauty and pearlescent charisma. Outstanding piece.............10+++++++++

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Irene Clark-hogg 03 October 2009

I am sure that anyone should be proud to have such a delightful piece of work dedicated to their name. You make the lady some-one all would wish as a friend. Your descriptive phrases are always a pleasure to read. Irene

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Seema Chowdhury 27 September 2009

this is such a nice and lovely poem.my tributes to Maggie too. i don't know her personally but through this poem i felt i could peep inside her for a while. thanks for shaqring this beautiful poem.

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Noel Horlanda 27 September 2009

nice piece dedicated to a very nice Lady of Poetry, I like every line all the way down but I love the following last lines most...her voice resounding a nightingale chorus, embraces a canyon of souls, her smile seeking from galaxy to galaxy to touch all in need, promising a pathway to eternal joy ever free. Last but the least...this piece fits her. She got that smile indeed. You're right, mate.10+

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What a glorious way to light Meggie's spirit and pure love she has for her friends on Poemhuner. I know she would particularly cherish 'streaming outward throughout the cosmos springs a symphony, her voice resounding a nightingale chorus embraces a canyon of souls' as she herself is a musician. God bless you for your kindness Ben in writing this wonderful Tribute. 10 love Karin

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Kesav Easwaran 26 September 2009

well written piece Ben...it's more than a tribute...Meggie richly deserves your praise..thanks...10.

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C. P. Sharma 26 September 2009

Very well deserved praise for the qualities of head and heartof the poetess and her poetic talents in equally praise worthy composition. CP

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Sandra Fowler 26 September 2009

An eloquent tribute to my beloved friend, Meggie. She is a lady of light at poemhunter.10 for both of you. Kind wishes, Sandra

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Ency Bearis 26 September 2009

A beautiful dedication to Meggie, a remarkable verses for a lovely woman with a brilliant words to describe with...very nice.......10

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Meggie Gultiano 25 September 2009

Surprised to see and read this, that this poem is for me, Ben. What a loving and beautiful piece dedicated to me.Thank you so much Ben, from the bottom of my heart.for the time and talent you shared with me and your PH friends. This is rich in imagery, your words flow gently and lovingly like the wind that whispers softy in to my ears.I particularly love these lines of yours that really tells about me, the inner me. her smile seeking from galaxy to galaxy to touch all in need I am greatly honored and so blessed to have you as my friend. I deeply appreciate your words.Shalom! ! ! God bless you.. Hugs, Meggie

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Beautiful tribute.I'm sure Meggie will be elated by your magical words..a ten and I linked your poem to Facebook..

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Sandra Martyres 25 September 2009

Ben, a truly beautiful and well deserved tribute to Meggie. I am sure she will be delighted when she reads this compelling piece...I agree with Patti...another masterpiece from your talented pen

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Patti Masterman 25 September 2009

There's a lot of beauty and compelling imagery in here. Great writing, as usual. (smile)

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a gateway to eternal joy, ever free. she is quite worthy of your high praise dear sir. a wonderful poem, reads like an appointment form above. i could see the love.

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