Wednesday, April 5, 2006

Her Soul Faced The Light Comments

Rating: 5.0

The fire...
I watch it's serpentine smoke,
it's breath,
rise into the cold night
...
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J... Tudor
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***** ********* 25 April 2006

You do have a very musical style J, and a wonderful way it is too. 10 from Tai

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Sandra Fowler 05 April 2006

Wonderful title. Sensitive, compelling poem.Keep up the good work. Kindest regards, Sandra Fowler

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Gillian.E. Shaw 05 April 2006

Very enjoyable poetry - I hope for more!

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