Monday, August 11, 2008

Her Smile Comments

Rating: 3.5

her smile is like an angels wings
flapping while the angel sings
her smile will always show
watching your love continue to grow
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joshua reid
COMMENTS
Silence Dogood 13 September 2008

A lovely poem again I like the ending great job :)

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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 16 August 2008

A beautiful smile from this lovely lady will always be there and lives in your memory and heart.Iam impress by your poem! Good Work!

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Gayatri Nambiar 11 August 2008

smile beautifully...from heart... no pain at the end. a lovely write

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Tanya Stanford 11 August 2008

You really do capture the feelings so effortlessly in your words. Lovely work. Thanks for sharing it.

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