Monday, June 9, 2008

Her Smile Comments

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her carefree smile,
With her long Flowing blonde hair,
Will leave us with a lot of heart ache and despair,
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lorissa cowan
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Lori, very outstanding and thoughtful of you, I love that poem so much, I can just picture it in my mind as i'm reading it, always send my love to her..... from Em oxoxox God Bless! ! !

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Greenwolfe 1962 10 June 2008

This is a beautiful tribute because I can see her in the words of the writer of this piece. That's called communication. Its what poetry and every other form of transmission is all about. These things either succeed or fail.This on, a success. GW62

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Amie-Lee ...... 09 June 2008

Wow......I never thought someone could write such a moving poem. I'm sure she would be soooooooo proud of you if she were alive to read this Amie xoxoxo

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