Her Smile Comments

‘I’ll carry it with care; unto my death…’ Slanderous and glitterus! . Ten dr.sakti Please visit my page and comment.

her smile is always framed in your mind..her smile is always the inspiration of your heart...how lovely your chosen words written in this piece.. naizz

A very good poem by a great poet.

such deep reverence, , the philosophy is superb, , , here i see a silent lover in the court but treasured with that image he is carrying, , , liked it, a 10

A LOVELY PIECE. GOOD JOB..........................................

Lovely painting of a sacred smile and soul, dear fellow poet Sathya Narayana. I like the phrase 'I’ll take it to His holy precincts / As a pleasant surprise to its original Artist'. I am glad to find such sensitivity. Thanks for sharing. I give you 10+ Joseph S. Josephides Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) ILP awarded

Who else could be more sincere than a true MVS. Beautiful thoughts and high level of sacredness in this intriguing poem. Thanks for sharing, arya

10 for this beautiful work. Lovely.

Beautiful Smiles speak to us of kindness, caring, love. They give us a sense of well-being. A wonderful feeling to keep. You have expressed in a Lovely way...10

it is the smile... that brings us in this world... a smile that brings the beauty of what is the life as we are now.... your poem makes the world smile... a heart that laugh...makes our day happy.... you are one of its kind... every now and then... i have to read your poem to make heart laugh....thank you...10+

Smile is surely something special and the more it is described through words the lesser it is for indescribable is a smile. You wrote this poem with a sincerity which can be felt as one reads it.

I'm smiling already, I like the poem. You should read mine. My latest one is called Appreciate.

Wonderful.... definitely to die for SMILE. I'd love to anyway........ after reading this.

very good indeed......

definately a lovely smile which cud lead to such lovely poetry.... :) (smile)

Her Smile is definitely your Muse Sir indelible imagery

Heartfelt and beautiful. Its a lovely creation

Nicely written. Good use of description at the beginning where ur talking about the smile. Beautiful: -)

Sathya Bhayya- As a pleasant surprise to its original Artist- you need to heave a heart of steel to prevent this mystfying work from becoming a lasting part of your memory- Bohat Barhiaya! ! !

Beautiful imagery.Lovely emotions.A full 10 for you.