Saturday, April 22, 2017

Her Sixth Sense Comments

Rating: 4.5

You were a pink rose when you were born,
she painted a fairy with a bouquet of pink roses,
but when she smelled a pink rose she cried,
her painting lacked sweet fragrance of a rose
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Akhtar Jawad
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Edward Kofi Louis 25 April 2017

Alas! She could have become a lovely artist! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Khalida Bano Ali 24 April 2017

Terrorism and extremism have already been a thread to humanity. Great message.

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Geetha Jayakumar 22 April 2017

Interesting poem with sad ending. A beautiful future was waiting for her. Unknowingly she portrayed her life in painting, which had such a disastrous ending....Loved reading it.

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