He was bragging about his silence
For a while
She was watching in silence
All the while
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Very Clever! ! So much said with minimal words. Brilliant Kesav! All this silence is killing me :) 10 Wendy
‘…Preaching doesn’t get featured out…’ Just like ‘Lip Service’ {LS]… where fluid transfusion required capsules are useless…well the world we live mostly bypass by LS …we make us like colorful enjoyable screensaver and stay like skinsaver… Thanks Sir for such a poem… 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK
I had to read it thrice to understand this poem. Very deep and profound.......I think this will haunt me for some more days
She was watching in silence excellent reflective poem about this kind of silence, thank you for sharing 10++++++++++
silence at times is a creepy one....just slink on you without warning...so beware... good write Kesav.....10
very nice and meaningful poem. i like your economy of words. thanks for sharing.
short yet full of brilliant thoughts silence vs silence...peace silence is deafening but at the same time....its better to keep silent and observe than say something of no importance... or argue with something we fully know... multiple message in this write... 10++++++ Lovelots, Snow
The black holes in space are far easy to fathom out than life giving species of woman.....and all you can say is 'What have I done! ' Clever little piece Sir Kesav +++++10 regards
Silently conquered...love won...ha, ha10...thanks for your comments
hahhahahaha..insanely masterful! ! ! ! ! ! ! ..only you sir could have done it so well in such short a measure of words...=)
this seems a perfect male female situation...it is not like that always...sir your craft is so evident in this short write
For a woman to prefer silence means something really serious matter, she might me trying hard for that within herself who knows, ! good piece! !
Well, her silence may have been due to super feminist pride that very few may like to handle. But then, it may not stay long - I mean her silence - for she may feel the need to quarrel with butterflies and bees alike - her innate nature - deep and intuitive.....arya Your lines are well taken always and pride falls with every encounter
Perfect preaching for those who are in silence......overwhelmed& cherished the piece.
A very good point here, liked and enjoyed it with perfect silence! :) 10 times ten.
Love the succinct and wise words of this. Big 10