He was bragging about his silence
For a while
She was watching in silence
All the while
Preaching doesn't get featured out
That easily
With the one that practices
Perfectly!
this seems a perfect male female situation...it is not like that always...sir your craft is so evident in this short write
hahhahahaha..insanely masterful! ! ! ! ! ! ! ..only you sir could have done it so well in such short a measure of words...=)
Very Clever! ! So much said with minimal words. Brilliant Kesav! All this silence is killing me :) 10 Wendy
‘…Preaching doesn’t get featured out…’ Just like ‘Lip Service’ {LS]… where fluid transfusion required capsules are useless…well the world we live mostly bypass by LS …we make us like colorful enjoyable screensaver and stay like skinsaver… Thanks Sir for such a poem… 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK
I had to read it thrice to understand this poem. Very deep and profound.......I think this will haunt me for some more days
She was watching in silence excellent reflective poem about this kind of silence, thank you for sharing 10++++++++++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
For a woman to prefer silence means something really serious matter, she might me trying hard for that within herself who knows, ! good piece! !