Wednesday, December 13, 2006

Her She To Me Comments

Rating: 4.7

by mid life, she’s in her nineties.
someone has written on her lines.
they must have been among the first, to make it there,
before the ticker disappeared from the pages.
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Eila Mahima Jaipaul
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 13 December 2006

VERY WELL PENNED WORK, EILA...DARTING LANGUAGE, THAT FLECKS WELL DEFINED IMAGES...SOLID CRAFTSMANSHIP ALL AROUND....FJR

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Dwayna Avery 13 December 2006

This is a good poem, it presents a mystery in a way.

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