Thursday, December 29, 2005

Her Private Moon Comments

Rating: 4.8

small child wakes up with a start
playground altercations smart
Her domain Her bedroom safe
love, control and comfort wait
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Sean Joyce
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Mary Nagy 29 December 2005

This is such a tender poem Sean.........very nice. Sincerely, Mary

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Sandra Fowler 29 December 2005

Charming poem. We all need a private moon at times. May your poems continue to shine in 2006. Regards, Sandra Fowler

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Wanda Swim Strunk 29 December 2005

I get this. I like the thumb sucking reference, it's said children do that because they miss their absent mom. It's interesting you mention a father and no mother in this. I had a bedroom I used to lock myself into when I was a dinky kid that had big windows and I would gaze at the moon. It was a constant in an inconsistant life.I still crave that room my secure hovel. good work. it's touching.

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Sean Joyce

Sean Joyce

Galway, Ireland
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