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Revisiting your piece. Yes, a sweet Dove indeed!

I'm reminded of those ending lines of a nursery rhyme'mother's pet, lovely too, is that you? ...no doubt, you're becomming everybody's pet....a nice adorable poem...and what is mandara poo in tamil...thank you

Wow..Lovely Lady is she.

you have very eloquently portrayed that 'she' of yours and her pride, Mandara...a wonderful she, she must be! the poem well versed, the words just glide over the lines swan like, on a serene pond-face...as an outsider, i feel this write contain telling indicative imageries! 10

'She's early at sunrise Some pure thoughts that gleam A crystal clear sweetness She spells out in streams...' That's beautiful write. Well penned Enjoyed reading it 10+