Her Perfumed Breath Of Lust Comments

oh such a lovely poem about beauty, attraction and love...well penned

Sounds like a beautifully romantic encounter! I hope it was true! :) Sincerely, Mary

Dear Uriah, Fine poem, this one! The details of the seduction and the marvelous surprise when passions (at least) are reciprocal shimmer with life and vitality. I only have one small technical quibble, the word so in the final phrase may not be necessary and may, in fact, break the rhythm of the line. It adds little. Think about it, just an editorial thought from an old grammarian. Best, Hugh

There are some beautiful images in this write Uriah, and it leaves one ecstatic with joy also. Nice poem Love Ernestine XXX