Monday, April 2, 2012

Her Path Of Memories (Song) Comments

Rating: 2.5

He left her in the darkness
To die in the way alone
Through the path of her memories
She suffers so
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Fadwa Daddou Gmiden
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Auwal Abdullahi 24 August 2012

Well done. Goodluck to you.

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Adeline Foster 02 April 2012

A very long poem this is. May I point out that to 'dye' means to color with a coloring agent. I am sure you meant to say 'die' which means to lose one's life. Adeline

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