Thursday, April 13, 2017

Her Pants Comments

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Her pants were lying on the floor
When I came home through the front door
Accompanying them were red rose blooms
And noises from an upstairs room
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Phil Soar
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Rajnish Manga 13 April 2017

Lovely imagery. Enjoyed reading it. But, there was something not palatable to my mind. A man is a man and cannot stand the idea, howsoever remote, of a third person. Thanks.

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