Tuesday, May 27, 2008

Her Pale White Skin. Comments

Rating: 4.1

Her pale white skin glows,
Like a moon lit night over,
A a beautiful oasis as she,
What my akeing heart,
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Pirate Love Magic Man
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Emma Kessler 10 February 2010

The power of touch, just being near a special person like that can send shocks through your body.

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Miriam Maia Padua 17 January 2009

fragile piece, as fragile as her... described her so sweetly...beautifully... your piece puts her to the edifice....

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*Trusting You* 26 December 2008

mmm the great power the touch of another has on us. that is why I am so addicted. good job. *Purkey Girl*

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Ashraful Musaddeq 18 September 2008

A marvellous short poem. Love it.

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ngaio beck 07 September 2008

Hauntingly beautiful in it's simplicity.

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Olivia Misery 20 July 2008

Aw, that's sweet. c: -olivia

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DELETED NOW 11 July 2008

I love white skin too cuz vampires have it lol I like the poem too<3

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