Monday, November 2, 2009

Her Pain Let Go (11/2/09) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Her pain let go
Darkness descends upon her
A wailing gunshot echoes through the empty room
The cool metal of the trigger tempting her
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Kayleigh ....
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Patrick A. Martin 02 November 2009

This is really a powerful poem. learn the art of more is less and you can turn it into a really powerful masterpiece.....................10

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