Thursday, October 9, 2008

Her Morning Beauty Comments

Rating: 5.0

Up the sun goes
His rays beg for acceptance
Her breath welcomes you
Her eyes the sun reaches not the toes
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Didier Sixte Kahungu
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Gloria Wekesa 14 October 2008

great poem well written and expressed the work of a real poet and real talent. i loved it.

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Samantha Ashley 10 October 2008

Very well articulated and, it flows very nicely. Definitely a 10.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 10 October 2008

interesting images and descriptions.......

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 10 October 2008

Hey Didier, i bet u her morning breath is as good as her morning beauty too.......

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Neil Marsden 09 October 2008

Some stunning imagery throughout this piece, gorgeous! Neil.

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