Sunday, July 11, 2010

Her Maker Comments

Rating: 4.3

You anger me so,
With the unresponsiveness that you show,
You loved her with breathless inner soul,
You held her with such sweetness and tender glow,
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jayne carpenter
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Khairul Ahsan 15 February 2014

The poem has an eye catching title. The emotions expressed revolve on 'her'. What about yours?

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Dr.subhendu Kar 13 July 2010

and you are making her go at it alone. innocence yet befuddles in vale of tune love when ruffles being hidden away of grace, beautiful write love when shadowed by clouds,10++, thanks for sharing

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Joseph Poewhit 11 July 2010

Interesting perspective of a love situation

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