Wednesday, June 29, 2005

Her Loving Heart Comments

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Her loving heart
She had to share it
Soon came the day
I couldn't bear it
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Sean Furlong
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Mike Farren 10 July 2005

I don't know much about reading poetry, but if I had to comment on this poem I would say that, well I like it a lot and possibly you should have made the poem a little bit longer

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