Wednesday, December 30, 2009

Her Love Song Comments

Rating: 5.0

I will hold your hands in mine
Will rest my head on your shoulder
And will walk along summer beach
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Kranthi Pothineni
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Seamus O Brian 19 June 2015

Sometimes the beauty is in what you can't see. Enjoyed this!

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Walterrean Salley 03 January 2010

This is a beautiful poem. Love it.

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Eyan Desir 31 December 2009

Nice poem I didnt like the repeat but you did a fair job..10

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Louis Rams 30 December 2009

glad you held the hand for the stars are hard to reach.

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Janell Cressman 30 December 2009

very awesome poem! ! ! ! ! (10 from me)

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Joseph Poewhit 30 December 2009

Much love in simple things.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 30 December 2009

This is like a love song more musical to be sung.

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Marieta Maglas 30 December 2009

nice repetition I will hold your hands in mine Will rest my head on your shoulder wonderful lyric poem 10+++++++++

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 30 December 2009

very well written... i was wandering, is this a free verse? ... but whether it is or not, it's still good.

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