Wednesday, August 31, 2011

Her Love For Me Comments

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Held by the hands of fright,
choking the lamp with blight.
Burning so brightly, once, it did,
now struggling; abiding death’s bid.
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Mark Trajano
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Chinedu Dike 25 December 2014

A nice poem grace with lovely rhymes. A good write, do keep it up.

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Diana Rose Tolentino 06 October 2011

you expressed the feelings with words very well. i like the rhyme and the the flow. Continue composing great poems.. thanks for sharing.

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