Her Love Comments

short and powerful.. enjoyed

cute! you embark for your world by expressing what you are. how original!

beautiful! absolutely beautiful. very good rhyming and the expresion of love. short, simple but genius piece of writing.

Loved this poem and the expressions you show in your lines are just fantastic! ! ! !

Fantastic expressions...Loved this piece

Your expression is superb Vipins.And burn my pain......exotic line.

you are v good at handling metaphors...

I like the last line-well written poem

But at all times I burn as a candle at her doors. Why? VP. The first three line superb!

Well written, Sir Thank u for your comments. Try reading some new love poems submitted and comment pls.

A song by bird, that may sing and memorized to travel around the world, not alone but with melodies_Unwritten Soul