Her Love Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

Her Love

Rating: 5.0


Her wings flutter the song of desire
And I may become nothing in that fire
Her love tempts me to wander in her shores
Let her love then solace all my heart's sores
And burn my pain as a candle at her doors

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 23 July 2012

A song by bird, that may sing and memorized to travel around the world, not alone but with melodies_Unwritten Soul

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Well written, Sir Thank u for your comments. Try reading some new love poems submitted and comment pls.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 03 August 2012

But at all times I burn as a candle at her doors. Why? VP. The first three line superb!

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Marieta Maglas 06 August 2012

I like the last line-well written poem

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The Reader 29 August 2012

you are v good at handling metaphors...

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Anita Sehgal 07 January 2013

short and powerful.. enjoyed

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Wabi Sabi 17 November 2012

cute! you embark for your world by expressing what you are. how original!

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 17 November 2012

beautiful! absolutely beautiful. very good rhyming and the expresion of love. short, simple but genius piece of writing.

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Darkangel Flyfree 16 November 2012

Loved this poem and the expressions you show in your lines are just fantastic! ! ! !

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Indranil Bhaduri 29 September 2012

Fantastic expressions...Loved this piece

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