Her wings flutter the song of desire
And I may become nothing in that fire
Her love tempts me to wander in her shores
Let her love then solace all my heart's sores
And burn my pain as a candle at her doors
Well written, Sir Thank u for your comments. Try reading some new love poems submitted and comment pls.
But at all times I burn as a candle at her doors. Why? VP. The first three line superb!
cute! you embark for your world by expressing what you are. how original!
beautiful! absolutely beautiful. very good rhyming and the expresion of love. short, simple but genius piece of writing.
Loved this poem and the expressions you show in your lines are just fantastic! ! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A song by bird, that may sing and memorized to travel around the world, not alone but with melodies_Unwritten Soul