Tuesday, May 31, 2022

Her Last Breath Comments

Rating: 5.0

Her last breath...
Was not foreclosed
By a heavy toll
Of ages design
...
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Kevin Patrick
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Written with such depth and feeling......Top score dear Kevin

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Powerful and poignant! This is what is happening today! Never know when bullets will pierce. A life full of fear and horror!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 01 June 2022

Excellent poem Kevin Have you read my poem 'Mr. Cruz Tell Me'? Please I would love yr opinion

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So timely and beautifully crafted and presented.

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A powerful and poignant depiction of racism and murder. The images are so heartrending that make you cry.

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Richard Wlodarski 31 May 2022

Kevin, this is one of your very best! An indictment against immoral racism and senseless murder. Top marks!

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