Her Kisses Drink Me Up Slowly Comments

Strong emotions expressed in articulate vocabulary and powerful insight. Beautifully done, lovely piece well put together. Thanks for sharing Rod.

ok, i read the interactive words of you and AA below. i don't 'do' well with symbolism. ;) :)

interesting sentence: Her butterfly tongue tired of probing Depleted calyxes, turned to one Replenished by keen yearning, But barely so. ca·lyx ˈkāliks/ noun plural noun: calyxes 1. Botany the sepals of a flower, typically forming a whorl that encloses the petals and forms a protective layer around a flower in bud. 2. Zoology a cuplike cavity or structure, in particular. a portion of the pelvis of a mammalian kidney. the cavity in a calcareous coral skeleton that surrounds the polyp. the plated body of a crinoid, excluding the stalk and arms. Origin did ya have to write dirty stuff? ! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Now she is stripped of contrived poises...............ok, poise, the NOUN form............... Definition of poise poised; poising **** please see below (way below) ========================================== what the Hell are Etheric vampires! ? ? [in Poet's Notes] Search Results Image result for define etheric The etheric body, ether-body, æther body, a name given by neo-Theosophy to a vital body or subtle body propounded in esoteric philosophies as the first or lowest layer in the human energy field or aura. It is said to be in immediate contact with the physical body, to sustain it and connect it with higher bodies. favorite lines: ...turns into a lascivious drunkard Reaching avidly inside for more Her butterfly tongue more forceful Thrusting with unholy thirst i'm gettin' thirsty! the poem rocks! but i still think it is just about a flower and a butterfly. otherwise, it is WAY TOO SEXY for PH readers! ! bri :) to MyPoemList. =============================== **** 2 poise noun Definition of poise 1 : a stably balanced state: equilibrium a poise between widely divergent impulses — F. R. Leavis 2 a: easy self-possessed assurance of manner: gracious tact in coping or handling; also: the pleasantly tranquil interaction between persons of poise no angry outbursts marred the poise of the meeting b: a particular way of carrying oneself: bearing, carriage - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

A bit of a raunchy piece written beautifully love the description of the butterfly tongue. It draws you in from start to finish. Nicely done. Annette

I enjoyed your write very much, well written.