Saturday, August 30, 2008

Her Kiss Comments

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Your kiss lies there
Waiting for my lips
to draw from you
Quivering breaths
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Cordell Rich
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Ency Bearis 31 August 2008

wonderful write..well explained emotion in few words concept... Ency Bearis

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Tanya Stanford 30 August 2008

I love how you can manage to capitavate the reader in such few lines. Brilliant

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Cordell Rich

Cordell Rich

Afton, Wyoming
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