Her Keys Comments
Her white hand in his fair hand,
Well nestling in the warm palm
He caresses the bulging bone,
And tries to roll the scroll button
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LOL! ! ! this is VERY naughty Onelia! ! ! Laughing at this cheeky post. Well done you: -) xx
I love your ironic take on love, Onelia! I found myself laughing aloud at the last few lines of this poem! After all if the Elizabethans could use the garden as a metaphor for love, why shouldn't the twentieth century poet use the computer keyboard for the same purpose! Men spend more time at computers than in gardens and the mastery of IT is a good parallel for the mastery of the art of making love, for many men! x Jan
An interesting poem with IT image that is contemporary approach.10 for this.
Motherly breast: at the sources of sexuality. Our poet describes very well the starting point and a stretch of our pathway.
Me thinkest you have directed well.... if that other brain of his can't follow those instructions... toss the keys away....10tacles wrap this one up! !
A tactile write - knowing which keys to press - clever composition here Onelia. justine.
Said it before. Need to say it again. Clever girl. t x
oh what a beauty embossing yet emblazoned by the key when no need of shift or caps lock but the sweet home beneath the scroll look..............superb write, quite smooching, well penned,10/10, thanks for sharing
Very clever Onelia! I think all men need to have a think about this one! LOL! Good poem, much fun! HG: -) xx
hahahah awesome! So creative, I love the use of keys and a female body, never thought of that, but wish I had. Your a great poet, im surprised I just found your stuff. Check out mine if you get a chance
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7/19/2025 1:05:26 AM # 1.0.0
I like that Onelia, very much!