Monday, May 19, 2025

Her Ignorance Comments

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You turned away when I called your name,
Left me standing in silent shame.
My heart cried out, my mind went numb,
Yet still, I longed for her to come.
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Asim Baadshah
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Timber Koleden 19 May 2025

Beautiful rhyming! Also a very sad poem that truly gives you some taste of the loss of broken friendships! This was excellent!

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