She sits upon her sofa, just sits & stares they say,
She, s waiting for the day to come
When he walks by her way.
But she will sit forever waiting
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A truly lovely poem Helen. It is poignant and full of feeling and sentiment. I like the rythmn and the rhyme, but the most powerful part is the story telling quality that runs throughout. It has sorrow and sadness. It draws you in, and I felt part of the journey
I don't mark (I'm not a teacher) This is a great poem
Steve
A Mad Merseyside Poet
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A truly lovely poem Helen. It is poignant and full of feeling and sentiment. I like the rythmn and the rhyme, but the most powerful part is the story telling quality that runs throughout. It has sorrow and sadness. It draws you in, and I felt part of the journey I don't mark (I'm not a teacher) This is a great poem Steve A Mad Merseyside Poet