Wednesday, March 11, 2009

Her Heart Of Glass Comments

Rating: 4.0

She has a heart of glass and she left it in my hands
I know I must be careful for it can easily be broken
We have a long conversation yet every word was unspoken
I hold onto your glass heart gently
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Kevin Fisher
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Man.... that was beautiful.... the day a boy does that for me, i would be complete. Nice poem man very beautiful

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Ted Sheridan 17 March 2009

Very good writing Kevin, please keep it up and continue to write.

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Tiffany Border 15 March 2009

wow! ! suxh ana amazing write! ! !

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Sarah Wes 15 March 2009

very pretty. sweet even. it's what a girl wants to hear...that you won't break her heart.

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*I'm not broken. * 12 March 2009

Awhhh, this is the sweetest poem ever. Your an amazing poet. Keep writing. =)

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Amit Jaiswal 11 March 2009

good one, expecting few more lines on the trouble you had faced to handle her heart....

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Kevin Fisher

Kevin Fisher

Canton, Ohio
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