Thursday, March 25, 2010

Her Heart Goes With Him Comments

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One day
, , without him, ,
the burning hole in her heart
aches, , where the piece is gone
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Alyssa Lippi
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Kudakwashe Roak Mutama 25 March 2010

sounds like early affections of a teenage love.... well expressed and straight to the point. l liked it. 'the burning hole in her heart aches' i really liked this statement... keep the good work up

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