Saturday, March 28, 2009

Her Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

Stirring from a slumber deep,
her hand sought mine,
Her eyes still bathed in shades of sleep,
Her lips sought mine,
...
Read full text

Laurie hill
COMMENTS
Susan Bagley 11 April 2009

And so is mine (my heart yours) . How many women on this site adore you as I do? Your words, how can we refuse your words? Susan

1 1 Reply
T S 11 April 2009

What a pleasure to wake up to such beautiful words........ 10 +++++

1 1 Reply
Myrtle Thomas 06 April 2009

Sounds like her heart is yours, a most lovely morning wake up call, awe I recall those. Beautiful a 10

1 1 Reply
Sonya Florentino 05 April 2009

ah... heavenly... to be awakened gently by a lover on a leisurely morning.... instead of a cold jarring alarm clock! !

1 1 Reply
Cindy Kreiner Sera 05 April 2009

Deep emotion, short but big in love and tenderness - you have just started and we are settling down for years of reading your work. Thank you...Cindy

1 1 Reply
Lynda Robson 30 March 2009

What more could you ask for, a touchingly beautiful write Laurie, 10 Lynda xx

1 1 Reply
Duh Huh 30 March 2009

How very romantic :) Lucky lady as there is nothing like waking beside your beloved. Thank you for sharing.

1 1 Reply
Close
Error Success