Monday, April 12, 2010

Her Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

You hold my hand as we walk along
Our souls to each other do sing a song
Of passion and love they do sing
And amazing moments they do bring
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Vaughn Bekker
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Chhavi Anupam 11 May 2010

rhyming is not easy to do, when free verse is in good vogue in our times. i apprecite Vaughn. Keep it up. Chhavi anupam

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Rajkamal P.j 10 May 2010

Then first eight lines are more than enough to express the intense thought.Very powerful indeed.There is a soul to this poem....

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loNeLY AnGel 01 May 2010

Wow... nice poem.. keep up the good work.. :)

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Leise Crandall 25 April 2010

this is an amazing poem (:

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