Sunday, October 14, 2012

Her Golden Veil Comments

Rating: 4.0

She moves to kiss me from above,
her body over mine,
moves to brush back her hair,
to keep it from my face when,
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Red O'Mara
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Ruby Honeytip 17 July 2015

And again....after these years....I say...this is such beautiful writing.

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Stevie Taite 25 November 2012

Wow! What an image conjured up! Really sensual and cleverly done! Thanks

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Ruby Honeytip 27 October 2012

This is a beautiful moment to write about! True love really does inspire.

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Ray Quesada 16 October 2012

This is a great poem, Red. Why write poems anyway if not for women?

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