Monday, April 10, 2006

Her First Time Comments

Rating: 4.9

She whispered 'will it hurt me? '
'Of course not' answered he
'It's a very simple process,
You can rely on me.'
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Bridgid Patrick
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Daniel Partlow 24 August 2007

I wish I had your knack for humor. Well done.

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Patrick Ladbrooke 26 October 2006

Yes! yes! It could have gone either way until that last stanza restored calm and decency. Great bit of humour. Patrick

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He he, very good read, keep you interested till the end.

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Anna Russell 28 June 2006

hee hee hee. And yes, my dirty mind was working it's usual overtime for a while there! funny poem, with your usual effortless rhymes. Hugs Anna xxx

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Hugh Cobb 10 April 2006

This is another clever and witty piece of light verse. Bridget you have a real facility for this, and yes, I fell right into the trap! After all, I'm male and you know what we think with! Excellent work. Best, Hugh

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Gina Onyemaechi 10 April 2006

LOL. Cracking poem, Bridg, you comedienne you. With warmth, Gina.

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Duncan Wyllie 10 April 2006

Hurray! ! ! ! This might take away some of the fear, great piece and so much imagination, Love Duncan

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