Thursday, April 19, 2007

Her Face Comments

Rating: 5.0

Her face
shining in the dead of night.
Her soul
shining to keep the light.
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Brian Hinckley
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Anita Blake 15 May 2007

amazing, i am speechless

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Agnes Török 06 May 2007

Wow, you just amaze me You capture every single moment, every glimpse of the eye, everything It's just great

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Michael Fischer 25 April 2007

Great write Brian. I liked the ending where you say that it was her inner and outer beauty that captured you and brought you to her presence (where you don't bleed) . Top marks! -Michael

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Brian Hinckley

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Buffalo, New York
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