Friday, May 13, 2016

Her Eyes And Ears Were Open Comments

Rating: 5.0

Zelda never cared to date
She did not need two moments
In just one moment she knew
She did not waste her time
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Edmund Strolis
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Annette Aitken 24 May 2016

You portray her as a very confident woman.Comes across nicely.Enjoyed the read. Annette.

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Nosheen Irfan 16 May 2016

It's such an amazing poem from a woman's point of view. I'll gladly fall into Zelda's shoes. She has faith she will find the right man n her idea of the right man fits perfectly with mine. Zelda's worth lies in her confidence n patience which are real strength of mankind in general n women in particular.

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Susan Williams 14 May 2016

May Zelda find him... or a reasonable facsimile thereof. But, Edmund, are her eyes and ears really WIDE open to the possibilities... perhaps a gruff down-to-earth horse-whispering cowboy might be a surprising fit! I like this poem- it should be contemplated seriously by women yearning to meet that RIGHT one. You explore many avenues of the heart and you do it stylishly, F. Scott... I mean Edmund. 10.

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Sarah Persson 14 May 2016

Oh I can relate to this. I stopped looking but still in hope of the illustrious Prince charming haha.. Thank you for you Eddie

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