Thursday, January 15, 2015

Her Eyes Comments

Rating: 4.8

In her pupils smile, as though,
Stars of the night sky, aglow.
Her silent looks, often,
With her eyes cast down,
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Khairul Ahsan
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Hazel Durham 13 May 2018

Exquisite write and so creative with mesmerizing lines!

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Khairul Ahsan 14 May 2018

Much inspired by your kind words and thoughtful appreciation of my poem, dear @ Hazel Durham. Thank you so much!

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Khairul Ahsan 19 October 2015

Hi Melvina, Thanks for your short but analytical comment on my poem. I am much inspired, much obliged.

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Melvina Germain 18 October 2015

The intoxication of eyes have captured your pen, thank you for sharing.....

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Amitava Sur 27 January 2015

A lovely explanation of the nature of eyes, which speaks of one's mind. Eye is a mirror of one's core of mind. Other parts of the body may camouflage the truth but eyes never. Very true.

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Khairul Ahsan 19 October 2015

Hi Amitava! I am quite impressed by your thoughtful comment on my poem. Your analysis is absolutely true. Thanks for reading my poem and leaving a comment here.

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Sandra Feldman 16 January 2015

You have captured the silent language of the eyes in a most touching and descriptive way., beautifully.! A more than 10

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Khairul Ahsan 19 October 2015

Hi Sandra, Thanks for your appreciative comment on my poem. Much inspired, much obliged.

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