Sunday, January 8, 2006
Her Extinction Comments
Rating: ★3.0
One eye awoke to a new sight
A reflection of reality
There before me, stood a girl drained
An identity fading into nothing
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7/22/2025 7:33:11 PM # 1.0.0
Your cramming a lot of impact into each of your self-contained lines makes this a powerful piece of writing. Good subject matter, too. (Two little things: I think it should be 'awoke' in the first line. And I don't understand the line about breath.)