Wednesday, July 18, 2018

Her Empty Castle Comments

Rating: 5.0

In her castle, she lived by herself
waiting for her prince to arrive
but he only came once in a while
just to keep the fire alive
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COMMENTS
Carl Roussell 20 July 2018

The fantasy created with a part time lover, very good poem, a 10.

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Aqua Flower 21 July 2018

Thank you for your comment on an old poem of mine. It came from the princess. She is still awaiting her prince to arrive and stay!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 19 July 2018

Such a lovely poem👍👍👍

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Aqua Flower 19 July 2018

Lovely is a lovely word. thank you!

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Robert Murray Smith 18 July 2018

Wonderfully penned.++++10- - - -

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Aqua Flower 19 July 2018

A wonderful comment! thank you!

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Aqua Flower 19 July 2018

Thank you for your wonderful comment! This is one of my original poems posted a while ago. I reposted as this was a favorite of mine!

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Practicing Poetess 18 July 2018

I had a prince like that- - He ran hot & cold- - Nearly drove me crazy! He couldn't commit, either. A girl friend told me, 'Don't expect more than he's giving now.' A very relatable poem!

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Aqua Flower 19 July 2018

I'm glad you didn't go crazy lol...love does that at times. Your girlfriend's advice is a good one! Thank you for your comments!

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Aqua Flower 19 July 2018

Us princesses have to stick together so we don't go crazy! Good advice from a girlfriend! Thank you for your comment.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 July 2018

An amazing poem Aqua! Liked it...10

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Aqua Flower 19 July 2018

Glad you liked it and thank you for your comment and rating!

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Rini Shibu 18 July 2018

Wow beautiful poem.. Hope her princess soon will erase the emptiness

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Aqua Flower 19 July 2018

Thanks Rini, What a nice comment! :)

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