Wednesday, December 12, 2007

Her Email (To Honduras With Love Vii) Comments

Rating: 4.9

Darkness creeps into the bluest skies
And alas, there are your words
The very essence and purpose
Of my day is about to begin
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Ayi Escalona
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Marieta Maglas 06 April 2010

wonderful meditative poem belonging to lyrism, thank you for sharing....

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Anju Addanki 15 July 2009

This email is wonderful poem i loved it.

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Lt Feitosa 07 April 2009

Nice lines! Lovely poem!

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Melanie Walendowsky Baker 15 January 2009

Ariel, I wonder how many of us can relate to your powerful words so wonderfully put together. And Oh, how we allow ourselves to become victims of our love's words! I loved it, and rated it a deserved 10.

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Ashley Hart 30 March 2008

Nicely done...it's so true also.

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Francis Duggan 02 January 2008

very good poem Ariel it is a very readable piece so well done

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Ewigi Liebe 27 December 2007

smile, lol, lol awesome work...

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Patrice James 25 December 2007

Very beautiful write thou, keep penning.

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Marvin Brato 12 December 2007

An electronic convergence of emotional statics sending passions connecting two hearts so inspired! Enjoyed it bro, thanks. A 10.

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