She waved down a passing cab,
And said, Hi Frank can I grab
A quick lift home, cos I'm a little late tonight,
Oh sure, he said, and smiled,
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First date, maybe great. First time, nerves on line. Thankyou for sharing this, I'm sure that many can relate.Love Duncan
I love the phrasing in this, it sort of jitters like a nervous young girl on her first date. great stuff Ernestine, regards, Lucy
A lovely structured poem. The a, a, b, c, c, b form is a favourite of mine. Great subject matter too. Andrew x