Monday, November 7, 2005

Her Date Comments

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She waved down a passing cab,
And said, Hi Frank can I grab
A quick lift home, cos I'm a little late tonight,
Oh sure, he said, and smiled,
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Ernestine Northover
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Andrew Blakemore 26 April 2008

A lovely structured poem. The a, a, b, c, c, b form is a favourite of mine. Great subject matter too. Andrew x

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Duncan Wyllie 01 April 2006

First date, maybe great. First time, nerves on line. Thankyou for sharing this, I'm sure that many can relate.Love Duncan

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Lucy Burrow 07 November 2005

I love the phrasing in this, it sort of jitters like a nervous young girl on her first date. great stuff Ernestine, regards, Lucy

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